The Giraffe and The Deer
By Manoj
Honorable Mention
Third Grade
Bellevue, WA
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"Several years ago, in the Gir forest, there lived, a deer and a giraffe. The deer was a very handsome fellow, so he always bragged about himself. Unlike the deer, the giraffe was very modest and kept to himself."
One hot summer day, when the animals were grazing in the open meadow, the giraffe got thirsty. So, he went to the water-hole to get a drink. Since he was too tall and had a very long neck, he had to bend, site on his forelegs and take a sip. At that moment, the deer happened to pass by. Looking at the giraffe's posture, he burst out laughing.
"Look at you, poor thing. Hard times, huh," he said. The Giraffe just ignored him and walked away.
Then in late summer, a severe drought hit the Gir Forest. There was an absolute scarcity of food and water. Many animals, like the deer, starved for many days, as the grass and shrubs had dried up.
One day, while desperately looking for food, the deer saw the giraffe eating fresh leaves from a tall tree, using his long neck. The deer's mouth started watering. He went and stood near the giraffe's feet, looking up, as if begging for leaves.
The giraffe felt sorry for the deer. He broke a few small branches, filled with leaves and threw them down for the deer to eat. After devouring the leaves, the deer felt satisfied.
He then realized, that if not because of the giraffe, he would have starved to death. So he said "I made fun of you long back, but you saved my life today. I'm so ashamed of myself."
"It's okay" said the giraffe." I'm just glad you realized your mistake." The deer left with gratitude!
The End
Comments
Posted by Samarth Rampur Bhardwaj (not verified) on Fri, 09/04/2009 - 4:46am
Hi Anna,
It great. I Like you story. Great Job, continue......... Plz do not stop it.
I would like hear more from you
Posted by Mrs. Toles (not verified) on Fri, 05/01/2009 - 7:15am
That was a great story Manoj. I am really proud of you. Keep writing and creating new stories!
Posted by Ms. Walker (not verified) on Wed, 04/22/2009 - 9:14am
Wow! I am so impressed by this! Excellent story and illustrations!
Posted by JP (not verified) on Wed, 04/22/2009 - 8:09am
Very nice art and story Manoj! congratulations. You have done a wonderful job. You have taken care of small details in your drawing and well written story!
Posted by amulya menon (not verified) on Wed, 04/22/2009 - 6:15am
Manoj your story & illustrations are awesome.I'm glad we are buddies.
Posted by Pratik Deolasi (not verified) on Tue, 04/21/2009 - 2:23pm
I am glad ur book got published. The best part was when the deer realised his mistake.
Posted by Raghuveer Subodha (not verified) on Tue, 04/21/2009 - 12:19pm
Manoj, it is really good to see how your ideas, creativity and hard word has come out in such a brilliant way. please keep us posted on more such stories and creativity
Posted by Balaji Mudduluri (not verified) on Tue, 04/21/2009 - 11:58am
Rock on Manoj....you narrated the story beautifully....We all are the fans waiting for your stories more to come .....
Posted by Amy Harvie (not verified) on Mon, 04/20/2009 - 1:38pm
Way to go Manoj!!! I am so very proud of your hard work! You have wonderful ideas, great word choice, and your illustrations are beautiful! I can't wait to read more of your stories!
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