Ruby and The Pink Pearl
By Lauren
First Place
Third Grade
Gig Harbor, WA
Watch The Story
Once there lived a mermaid named Ruby. Her parents named her Ruby because she was born very special with a shinny red ruby in her belly button! No other mermaids had anything so special! Ruby had long silky hair, hazel eyes, curly black eyelashes and a very sweet face. Her fin was extra long and when she swam it sparkled and glistened.
One summer morning as she swam home, a gigantic oyster caught her eye. She swam over to it. Ruby peaked through a tiny crack. Inside she saw a smooth shiny, pink pearl! Ruby wanted it to make a necklace for her best friend Marine's birthday party. It would be a perfect gift. She tried to force it open, but it was stuck.
Ruby sobbed tears of sadness. The giant oyster surprised her by whispering, "Password, password, password." She said "how ill I ever know the password?" She began to search for a clue. First she picked up a starfish, looking at its imprint for a clue. No luck. Then she looked under eight octopus legs. Still no luck.
Hiding in a clump of seaweed she found a sunken treasure chest. Ruby wondered if it could have fallen off King and Queen Cloran's royal ship. Inside she found Queen Cloran's gorgeous jewelry. At the bottom of the trunk she found a secret locket, written in gold she read BELIEVE. Could it be the password? With a giggle she did two backward flips and swam back to the gigantic oyster.
Ruby said "I think I know the password." In a gruff voice the oyster replied "then give it up!" Ruby whispered "Believe." They oyster smiled and opened wide. Ruby joyfully said "thank you" and with the pink pearl swam of to make a necklace for Marine.
The necklace was done, wrapped in pink wrapping paper with a red bow. When she arrived at Marines birthday party her friends Norrie, Zoe, Rachel and and Crystal all agreed Ruby's gift was the best in the whole wide ocean!
The End
Comments
Posted by Baby Boutique (not verified) on Fri, 10/30/2009 - 2:22pm
Very cool pics... thanks for the share.
Posted by coin pearl (not verified) on Sat, 07/11/2009 - 2:05pm
awesome job!
Posted by increase website traffic (not verified) on Wed, 07/01/2009 - 6:10pm
i would like to my kids in this contest. this is so great.
Posted by Linda Harville (Nana's cousin) (not verified) on Fri, 05/29/2009 - 5:50pm
What a great story with beautiful illustrations. I hope to listen to you on the radio and I wish you best of luck in winning in the next round.
Cousin Linda
Posted by Oscar's Mom (not verified) on Thu, 05/28/2009 - 9:18pm
Congratulations Lauren. You have written a lovely story. Oscar and I enjoyed reading it together. We especially enjoyed your illustrations. You are a very talented young lady!
Posted by Mommy and Daddy (not verified) on Tue, 05/19/2009 - 3:57pm
Congratulations sweet girl! We are always amazed by your wonderful imagination and creativity, and your incredible talent is demonstrated in your story and illustrations. You worked so hard and we couldn't be more proud.
Love, Mommy and Daddy
Posted by Luke (not verified) on Fri, 05/08/2009 - 10:28am
Lauren,
Fun pictures. I liked the octopus.
Cousin Luke
Posted by Ethan (not verified) on Thu, 05/07/2009 - 2:35pm
Dear Lauren,
I like your pictures because your doing your best and you are focused. Good luck in the contest!
Cousin Ethan
Posted by Richard Kott (not verified) on Thu, 05/07/2009 - 1:04pm
Lauren, I am so impressed with your creative and imaginative mind. Congratulations on writing this story and winning your age group. Just know from now on that you will be telling the stories around the fire pit at the lake.
Grandpa Dick
Posted by Aunt Betsy (not verified) on Thu, 05/07/2009 - 12:05pm
Way to go Lauren. We are so proud of you. Can't wait to see you on t.v. Let us know. Great pictures.
love aunt betsy
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